Wednesday, May 21, 2014

5384. GOLD

GOLD
I'm riding the train with all the overnighters from NYC
on their overight returns to Trenton. Luckless idiots
Passed out. Cheap. Cheesy. The early mornings are
funny for that  -  usually you think sleepless oafs, but
these are always sleeping  -  sprawled out with no
disclaimers, except their fine new sneakers for $12.99
and hoodies for $5.18. High fashion has a rigamarole
all its own in the 'hood. Hurry on home to mama!
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I'm thinking about writing, as I sit. Using a sentence
as 'The boy plays with his new gold toy' I'm wondering
what the difference would be if it was written instead: the
boy plays with his new golden toy.' Adjective? Does the
'gold' being changed to 'golden' make a difference?
And, if so, what is being described anyway,
the toy itself, or the quality of same?

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